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 > *If life is a game, MetaGame is about redefining the way we play it.*
 
-MetaGame is an experiment seeking more efficient & fun ways of progressing through life and organizing societies in which self-interest is better aligned with the common-interest. Quite literally building a new world a layer atop of the current one.
+MetaGame is an experiment seeking more efficient & fun ways of progressing through life and organizing societies in which self-interest is better aligned with the common-interest. 
 
-Aiming to reorganize the world by leveraging cutting-edge technologies like the blockchain, MetaGame is here to empower people & communities through a gamified framework for facilitating development, incentivizing collaboration & coordinating at scale.
+Aiming to reorganize the world by leveraging cutting-edge technologies like the blockchain, MetaGame is here to empower people & communities through a gamified framework for facilitating development, incentivizing collaboration & coordinating at scale. Quite literally building a new world a layer atop of the old one.
 
 ## Back in Reality
 
-MetaGame is being built by a bunch of weird dreamers who decided to take matters into their own hands. It is not a utopia & the chances of us fully realizing the vision of MetaGame are extremely slim, but there's *nothing* we'd rather be doing. You will inevitably encounter things that are broken or suck ass & it's up to you to suggest improvements.
+MetaGame is being built by a bunch of weird dreamers who decided to take matters into their own hands. It is not a utopia & though the chances of us fully realizing the vision of MetaGame are extremely slim, but there's *nothing* we'd rather be doing. You will inevitably encounter things that are broken or suck ass & it's up to you to suggest improvements.
 
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