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 next_section: installation
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-This site aims to be a comprehensive guide to Jekyll. We’ll cover everything
-from getting your site up and running, creating and managing your content,
+This site aims to be a comprehensive guide to Jekyll. We’ll cover topics such
+as getting your site up and running, creating and managing your content,
 customizing the way your site works and looks, deploying to various
-environments, as well as some advice on participating in the future development
-of Jekyll itself.
+environments, and give you some advice on participating in the future
+development of Jekyll itself.
 
 ## So what is Jekyll, exactly?