jody tate 1786aed71d a few wording tweaks ...

- Changed some existential constructions (yes, they're really called
existential http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Existential_clause). These
aren't innately evil, but rewordings of existential clauses often sound
more direct.
- Changed a "which" to a "that."

2013-08-27 09:11:33 -07:00

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